Just trying to add a little realism to the story.Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-24 09:36:12dat bitch is going to DIE when he finds out shes been fuckin her ten yr old brother. lmaoAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-09 03:50:38How about number nine?«12345» I did like the occasional incest between Phoebe and her younger brother, although more of that would have been an addition to the story. Too young and inexperienced. The initial rape and subsequent start of the incestuous relationship between him and Phoebe could have, just as easily, been the result of PTSD from the Colonel’s multiple deployments to war zones. Also, the father should have realized that he needed to allow his daughter, for the sake of appearances at the least, to date and mingle with the other students she inter-played with in school. 51 comments«12345»olblueyesReport 2019-02-16 03:28:34summing it up,, she is a slut-sub and daddy is a dom,,well written, well paced,, got caught up in it, but didn’t satisfy my taste budsAnonymous readerReport 2015-10-12 01:21:11the whole brother thing was kind of a down fall of the story. Too young and inexperienced. lmaoAnonymous readerReport 2014-06-09 03:50:38How about number nine?«12345» The dad part was amazing as well the teacherMasterTtrianglelordReport 2015-08-12 17:49:16I have now read all 8 Chapters of this story.
