10 comments«12»TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:08I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:06I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-18 07:05:25Please continueAnonymous readerReport 2015-01-07 22:47:18Fantastic Rachel stories. 10 comments«12»TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:08I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:06I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-18 07:05:25Please continueAnonymous readerReport 2015-01-07 22:47:18Fantastic Rachel stories. Great.«12» 10 comments«12»TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:08I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.TonyMichaelsReport 2022-09-24 21:17:06I liked the premise and the first chapter, but it feels like the story is getting so far from any kind of reality, it starts to fall flat for me.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-18 07:05:25Please continueAnonymous readerReport 2015-01-07 22:47:18Fantastic Rachel stories.
