3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-04-03 19:02:42Very different and well written…anonymous readerReport 2011-12-14 06:10:23hot story. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. please look up the definition and example’s of first,second and third person rules.«1» 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-04-03 19:02:42Very different and well written…anonymous readerReport 2011-12-14 06:10:23hot story. 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-04-03 19:02:42Very different and well written…anonymous readerReport 2011-12-14 06:10:23hot story. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. 3 comments«1»Doozy woof HunterReport 2021-04-03 19:02:42Very different and well written…anonymous readerReport 2011-12-14 06:10:23hot story. your a good writer made me hardanonymous readerReport 2011-12-13 23:43:24have you ever read mark twain . but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. your a good writer made me hardanonymous readerReport 2011-12-13 23:43:24have you ever read mark twain . i only ask beause he is a prime example of multi-person viewpoints.he wrote seamlessly from one persons perspective to another.you seem to have a desire to do the same. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. but your dialog comes off as stited and chopy. please look up the definition and example’s of first,second and third person rules.«1» please look up the definition and example’s of first,second and third person rules.«1»
