AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. HOW OLD ARE THEY? Me personally I give it 3 out of 5 and I look foward to see this progress.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-19 06:01:46A great story but needs to be longer. WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» DID THEY EVER FEEL ANYTHING FOR EACH OTHER BEFORE THIS? this is a first draft only and need major work before it is posted. AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. DO THEY KEEP FUCKING OR WAS IT A ONE TIME THING? WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more.
