Overall, not bad for a first submission. Amateur porn The basic premise is a bit off for a supposed “true story” as well. A member of your family?!? Overall, not bad for a first submission. You were a virgin, but the girl who has punished you to sleep on the couch is no virgin – still, you know from the way she answers to you that she’s masturbating… 2 comments«1»Ovid58Report 2012-11-12 06:07:23I didn’t vote, since I don’t want to spoil your ranking – anyway, please be more careful – just as the anonymous reader has already said, you switch between third person and first person in a way that really makes things hard to follow… Who is she? You were a virgin, but the girl who has punished you to sleep on the couch is no virgin – still, you know from the way she answers to you that she’s masturbating… Sorry, but, as a virgin, you just seem to know too much!anonymous readerReport 2012-11-11 08:56:41You switch between third person and first person seemingly at random. Overall, not bad for a first submission. Who is she? On the other hand, you’ve mentioned that this is a true story…
