6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 18:01:59you werent kidding when you said short. Amateur porn i would recommend writing it out first and then release chapters only as you find them… Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi body), I completely forgot he was tied up xD. I do also agree that I am rushing this part a bit, but that is partially to get to what most people are here for… i would recommend writing it out first and then release chapters only as you find them… You obviously have a story to tell in your head and you want to get it out. One of the basics in dialogue is to start a new paragraph when the speaker changes. This eliminates relying on literary intuition or repetative he said she said. Though there are ways how he could have put it away (hands tied in front of hi body), I completely forgot he was tied up xD. But thank you for your reply 🙂 I will try to go more slowly from here and remember to reread my chapters before posting them :)anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 16:15:28Hey Kitsune_Lord, thank you for your response.
