Good Luck.anonymous readerReport 2013-12-08 12:51:06I look forward to reading part 2anonymous readerReport 2013-08-31 03:52:09One of the most eloquent burns I’ve seen on this site. Amateur porn Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. It’s also a cliff hanger which I personally don’t like. Read some books so that you can see just how a story should be written. Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. However, it’s your story and you can do as you please with it. Lastly, you used the word ‘endeavor’ out of context; it doesn’t fit your intention, so quit using words too big for yourself. Yes, you can go look that word up, too.anonymous readerReport 2013-08-21 22:45:08That’s strange you call yourself a “Redneck” yet you use Spanish, albeit quite poorly. See if it’s what you really want to say. However, it’s your story and you can do as you please with it. I am a “Redneck” and that doesn’t require you to be stupid, your poor attempt at trying to write “Redneck dialogue” was absolutely horrible, why it made me pucker up tighter’n a bulls ass at fly time!! 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2016-08-13 07:17:21Good grief.
