but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. Good story.. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. The only bad thing I found that should be addressed is that you should proof-read it a few times before publishing it. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. Good story.. Good story.. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. now write a sequel :)anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 01:01:17teri maa ki saale. kucch bhi likhata.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 00:44:14yo ho hoe yes no maybe so«1» now write a sequel :)anonymous readerReport 2013-11-30 01:01:17teri maa ki saale. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more. There were a few things wrong with the grammar/ writing… 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. I’m afraid that is why your approval score is lower than I expected. 3 comments«1»animal99Report 2013-11-30 15:04:15I had to log in to write this:
I really enjoyed your story. but I really enjoyed your story, and your ideas. Good story.. I am looking forward to seeing more from you so I hope you write more.
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