Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. But I did finish it. I just didn’t get sucked in. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. But I did finish it. Would have been awesome if the paladins got their asses kicked at the end. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. But I did finish it. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it. Good job over all!«1» 1 comments«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK.
