I cant wait to read part two! Amateur porn 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-25 23:29:26Amazing story! I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. The twist was pretty good especially with her name but sort of saw it comming, but i didnt really care as it was a really good story. All and all ill give it a 4/5. But the twist, DAMN!!«12» Confusing. All and all ill give it a 4/5. I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. Confusing. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. All and all ill give it a 4/5. But the twist, DAMN!!«12»
