It appears that you have promise. lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. Amateur porn lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up. I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that. lol is it true or a fantasy cause im 22 and i kinda feel bad for u if its trueAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-24 08:34:57Nice story. 4 comments«1»edmondlReport 2016-04-21 03:24:45True or fantasy keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2010-05-09 15:59:01wtf is this why does all this sound weird… You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read.
