You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. Amateur porn But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. You should clarify which was doing what thus allowing better understanding of the situation. But didn’t like the Cliffhangers at the end though. You should had added more parts.Anonymous readerReport 2016-06-30 21:55:58Please do more the best stories I’ve ever read PleaseMerc098Report 2016-03-31 08:25:36ok so apart from the spelling and grammar errors, your story has much to be desired. while the plot was decent and had some alluring elements, it was lacking character development and realism. at one part in these last few chapters during the threesome with His girlfriend and cousin I could not tell which one was doing what since you failed to name who the third party person was until the end. You really need to add more chapters.Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-09 02:19:27Hot that all of them got pregnant with his baby. 45 comments«12345»Stealth EagleReport 2017-07-11 19:23:01I must say this is an excellent series I am giving the whole series a positive rating.Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-19 02:10:11After reading this hot story I feel that you dropped the ball.
