And give the guy more “Alone-Time” with the girl.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 08:21:12Wow, really slow start! You might try using more words like “I’m” instead of “I am”, and “We’re” instead of “we are”. Amateur porn Didn’t know you could not use quotation marks in the comments. You might try using more words like “I’m” instead of “I am”, and “We’re” instead of “we are”. Didn’t know you could not use quotation marks in the comments. Fuck thisanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:43:23Geez! almost as hard to read as some of the stories posted here…Sorry, but my suggestions are still valid. …lolanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:41:29Overall, it has some potential. almost as hard to read as some of the stories posted here…Sorry, but my suggestions are still valid. …lolanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:41:29Overall, it has some potential. You might try using more words like “I’m” instead of “I am”, and “We’re” instead of “we are”. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-21 01:31:51Do you think that you can finish it?anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 10:18:17All they did was make out? 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-21 01:31:51Do you think that you can finish it?anonymous readerReport 2012-08-10 10:18:17All they did was make out? Too much detail on the ship, and where you went on the ship. Didn’t know you could not use quotation marks in the comments. almost as hard to read as some of the stories posted here…Sorry, but my suggestions are still valid. …lolanonymous readerReport 2012-04-20 12:41:29Overall,
