Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? Amateur porn punctuation, dreadful. So really take to heart what a previous poster said “grammar, horrible. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? I’m all for extra information, but not when that information has no relevance what so ever to the story. oh and who the fuck is danielle?Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-10 22:49:03The setup needs either more focus or elimination. I’m all for extra information, but not when that information has no relevance what so ever to the story. and give the guy a break about the justice system thing, he obviously doesn’t know, but i respect him for trying to use it as a backstory. Who cares if you have friends in the highway patrol and they clock your car? 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-04-15 18:12:30if you’re going to comment on grammar, at least spell the word ‘grammar’ right.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-29 01:25:40i loved it, and thought it was good. Its long, and nice…but just poorly given to us.
