14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-19 14:07:38Wrong category entirely. Amateur porn also, the story was not terrible.LustdemonReport 2009-03-14 15:43:25This was a horror story and it was not to my taste.The main criticism I would make is that you did not categorise the story correctly. This should not be here. Plus lacking proper tagsReaderReport 2009-07-13 17:21:13Just put it in the right Category and it’ll be good. I really hope you only vent your anger through your writing. 14 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-19 14:07:38Wrong category entirely. Plus lacking proper tagsReaderReport 2009-07-13 17:21:13Just put it in the right Category and it’ll be good. Plus lacking proper tagsReaderReport 2009-07-13 17:21:13Just put it in the right Category and it’ll be good. I bet you anything there would be a ton of more postive reviews. This is a very dark story and the many readers would initally be expecting something a bit more light hearted from the catgorisation and the title. This should not be here. also, the story was not terrible.LustdemonReport 2009-03-14 15:43:25This was a horror story and it was not to my taste.The main criticism I would make is that you did not categorise the story correctly. I bet you anything there would be a ton of more postive reviews.
