please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12» 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-26 14:24:24Sequal pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-26 11:07:41Good story well told. Amateur porn lol. . It had that rare reality feel! Preferably the opposite Sex. Then the chance of not getting some knowing looks and Sniggers from pals a tent flap away!? But release after YOUR final check. . Writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! Other tip at this level write, check, edit, put away for 3 days and check and edit again. . Even the end . . . It had that rare reality feel! please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12» lol. . . please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12» . please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12» Unless uve got a wise knowing friend to run it past. In supposed True Story land. I think you gave up a little too soon, though. . Preferably the opposite Sex. I think you gave up a little too soon, though. Even the end . The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. . . I think you gave up a little too soon, though. lol. However the next morning facing each other: WOW.
