For someone who calls himself(?) a grammar Nazi, you suck at English. Amateur porn The story line is not bad. When you’re confident that your story is as good as it’s going to get, post it. That’s called irony. I am a “Redneck” and that doesn’t require you to be stupid, your poor attempt at trying to write “Redneck dialogue” was absolutely horrible, why it made me pucker up tighter’n a bulls ass at fly time!! Before you post a story, really look at it. You’re dumber than a third grade retard and hornier than three peckered billy goat. I bet when you read these here stories you get stiffer than a peter on a weddin’ night! Secondly, you used a comma where a semicolon belongs, and then didn’t add commas where they were needed. You wouldn’t know a Redneck if one stepped up and kicked you in the ass idjit(sic)!!!!! You’re gonna give us all a bad name with with your damn nonsense. There should be a very noticeable difference.
