8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-28 23:29:24WHOA it totally took me halfway through the story that this was about Thunderbirds. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-28 23:29:24WHOA it totally took me halfway through the story that this was about Thunderbirds. Amateur porn I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… Unfortunately, I didn’t really want to make it sexual so I stopped after I figured it out. I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… I’m sorry you got such bad creds from these perverts… Keep up your writing because you have better grammar than most people on here.READERReport 2006-09-22 19:40:57the sex scene is like last and all of the first part is shitREADERReport 2006-04-22 18:15:04I’d prefer to see something that wasnt erotica from you. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. It was a little long winded, but the sex scenes and the details through out the s tory were great. You have talent.READERReport 2008-02-16 23:00:39I hate people who dis others for what they think is “poor writing.” I loved the story.
