Another glaring one was… She was simply addressing you accurately.)«1» He left his house in the morning but she had her first orgasm of the night?? Another glaring one was… Yup. Another glaring one was… 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-17 17:32:18to the first guy this is fiction and ur a dumbass. You’re a writer’s writer. Among other errors, you fucked up his name at least once. She was simply addressing you accurately.)«1» Yup. She was simply addressing you accurately.)«1» Among other errors, you fucked up his name at least once. …. …. You’re a writer’s writer. He left his house in the morning but she had her first orgasm of the night?? second, this was a good story.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-30 11:07:01or maybe he left his house in the morning but didnt meet her until later in the day dickwadanonymous readerReport 2012-04-30 03:43:22Looks like you put a whole thirty five or forty seconds of thought into this one. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-05-17 17:32:18to the first guy this is fiction and ur a dumbass.
