The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» Run-on sentences it could be an interesting read. The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. The way it is now makes it more of a chore to get through than for the stroke factor it ends up providing. Very well wrote which maks it readable can’t wait for part 2!!!«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-11 16:50:16If this story were to be developed better and the punctuation and sentence structure were fixed ie. Run-on sentences it could be an interesting read. Give it another try.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-10 09:05:53so why can’t my dog remove him self from my gf after hs has knotted her then?anonymous readerReport 2013-01-10 02:04:01you should back up, show the history
