03″ – Twenty-one Year Old Maritally-engaged Brother, Kevin and Twenty Year Old Married Sister, Lilly. Additionally, several–more than three or four–sentences do not make any sense, partially due to missing commas (,)–the separation of ‘thought processes or change of thought direction–which would have been less confusing with proper punctuation. 03″ – Kevin and Lilly – (Brother and Sister)
This chapter is like two ships passing in the night–kind of like the lights were blinked as an acknowledgement of their presence, and then they continued on as if they were destined to bigger and better things separately in other parts of the world!! I wish he had written moreAnonymous readerReport 2015-07-10 16:15:15Duh! It’s as if they had NO LIFE together previously, and definitely NO LOVE FOR EACH OTHER! Can you imagine the time between their togetherness and the things not encountered in between. If one were blindfolded and sauntered up to Chapters 02 versus Chapter 03, and read them without any knowledge that Chapter 03 is a continuation of Chapter 02, the reader would NEVER have any inkling, any feeling, any consideration the two chapters were related, the reader would never know. 9 comments«12»bigdaddyg123Report 2016-08-18 02:41:01″A Lifelong Affair – Pt. 9 comments«12»bigdaddyg123Report 2016-08-18 02:41:01″A Lifelong Affair – Pt. I wish he had written moreAnonymous readerReport 2015-07-10 16:15:15Duh!
