Some of the spelling was goshawful, but other than that it rates an 8/10.READERReport 2006-07-30 22:19:39″tongue”«12» Take your time to develop your stories.READERReport 2006-12-24 01:08:51I HARD BOOBIESREADERReport 2006-08-01 05:09:07write a part 1 now this was greatREADERReport 2006-07-31 04:44:35This story would have been much more erotic had it been told a little slower, building some anticipation of what was about to happen to each of the girls. Take your time to develop your stories.READERReport 2006-12-24 01:08:51I HARD BOOBIESREADERReport 2006-08-01 05:09:07write a part 1 now this was greatREADERReport 2006-07-31 04:44:35This story would have been much more erotic had it been told a little slower, building some anticipation of what was about to happen to each of the girls. But it was OK. Take your time to develop your stories.READERReport 2006-12-24 01:08:51I HARD BOOBIESREADERReport 2006-08-01 05:09:07write a part 1 now this was greatREADERReport 2006-07-31 04:44:35This story would have been much more erotic had it been told a little slower, building some anticipation of what was about to happen to each of the girls. Some of the spelling was goshawful, but other than that it rates an 8/10.READERReport 2006-07-30 22:19:39″tongue”«12» Some of the spelling was goshawful, but other than that it rates an 8/10.READERReport 2006-07-30 22:19:39″tongue”«12» 7 comments«12»READERReport 2007-01-30 02:50:57God awful, you rushed it and it was a trainwreck.
