Nice job.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-23 10:32:21Nope…another one like a bad porn flick…cum on her face…Gotta get that money shot even if it’s words in a story….BORING!!! Would have been nicer if you would have described the full sex! if you hadn’t rushed an ending into one paragraph this story could have been great, but as is, it’s stuck on goodAnonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 04:48:23Nice story buddy! Nice job.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-23 10:32:21Nope…another one like a bad porn flick…cum on her face…Gotta get that money shot even if it’s words in a story….BORING!!! Nice job.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-23 10:32:21Nope…another one like a bad porn flick…cum on her face…Gotta get that money shot even if it’s words in a story….BORING!!! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 19:20:07good story, a good build up is very important for engaging the reader…saying that, you’re posting on a sex site and you skipped all the sex!!!! 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-24 19:20:07good story, a good build up is very important for engaging the reader…saying that, you’re posting on a sex site and you skipped all the sex!!!! Nice job.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-23 10:32:21Nope…another one like a bad porn flick…cum on her face…Gotta get that money shot even if it’s words in a story….BORING!!!
