Tonight’s the night. I was going to start a life for my self. No problem. When I closed the gap she took my hands into hers. Or we are staying in the van.”
She then turned and looked back into the camper part of the van. What could I add or remove to make the story better. Felling sorry for what I had done, and scared of getting her pregnant. “What uhh… But I learned to deal with it. I didn’t think she would want to sleep in bed with me. “I’m sorry. I had never been so excited in my life. “It’s fine. Without saying a word and in one solid motion I swung her down into the sand and rises myself over top of her. When she finally did so, Miranda was about 10 feet from the water. It was dark so I couldn’t tell much about her. It’s ok. What’s your name?” I asked
“Miranda.”
“It’s nice to meet you.” I said awkwardly. Her massive melons bouncing in my face, so I finally took one of her nipples in my mouth.
